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The mystery phone call

redtelephoneI picked up the phone and dialed as quickly as I could. The news was hot and it had to be served immediately!

-        Dan hi! You’ll never believe this!

-        What’s up?

-        She did it again. Just couldn’t NOT, could she?

-        Who, Sarah?

-        Of course! Who else?

-        What did she do?

As soon as I started rambling about what had happened in full detail, I heard a beep on the other end. Line was down. And apparently…I was also talking to the wrong person!

NB. This story is a response to this weekend’s Trifecta Writing Challenge for exactly 33 words of dialogue.

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3 thoughts on “The mystery phone call

  1. I want to know what Sarah did, too!

  2. I can hear this – not quite all dialogue unless it is being told 3rd person to someone else? :) Maybe a “Julie, you’ll never guess . . .” but then you’d have to cut words somewhere.

  3. Aw, too bad we’ll never know what Sarah did :(

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