The mystery phone call
I picked up the phone and dialed as quickly as I could. The news was hot and it had to be served immediately!
– Dan hi! You’ll never believe this!
– What’s up?
– She did it again. Just couldn’t NOT, could she?
– Who, Sarah?
– Of course! Who else?
– What did she do?
As soon as I started rambling about what had happened in full detail, I heard a beep on the other end. Line was down. And apparently…I was also talking to the wrong person!
NB. This story is a response to this weekend’s Trifecta Writing Challenge for exactly 33 words of dialogue.
MC's Whispers 
I want to know what Sarah did, too!
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I can hear this – not quite all dialogue unless it is being told 3rd person to someone else? 🙂 Maybe a “Julie, you’ll never guess . . .” but then you’d have to cut words somewhere.
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Aw, too bad we’ll never know what Sarah did 😦
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