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The canoe ride

CanoeQuick, jump in and I’ll push!

She leapt in, the breeze lifting up her coral dress, revealing her tanned thighs.

Oscar pushed the wooden canoe into the lake and as soon as it hit the water, he jumped in to join Priscilla. It was a beautiful morning – a cloudless sky; the sun shining. It was the beginning of spring and after a harsh winter, everyone was looking forward to it.

They had ditched school to go for a canoe ride. Priscilla was smiling, her hair flowing wildly against the wind.

That was the day Oscar fell in love with her.

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23 thoughts on “The canoe ride

  1. Made me smile 🙂 Lovely post.

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  2. I think I’d have fallen in love with her too, the way you pile energy and hope into this story.

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  3. Nice descriptions and dialogue – capture the feelings of a new love perfectlly.


  4. This is very romantic. I’m sure she fell in love on such a beautiful day, too.

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  5. With such a lovely beginning, I hope it ends well.


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  6. Nice take on the prompt


  7. Aww, so sweet. Great descriptions, I was almost there.


  8. A sweet beginning….Nicely done.

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  9. So sweet.

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  10. This sounds like a great beginning — hope the love is answered.


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