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Evading time

hourglass @SandraCrookShe looked at the hourglass and could feel her panic turn into a cold stream of sweat running down her spine.

Stress would always get to her head. And stomach.

But time was something against she could never fight and win. Most of the time.

She couldn’t delay it anymore. He had to find out now. Later would be too…late.

She took a deep breath and began marching like a soldier into battle.

But the minute she extended her first step, a strong hand grabbed her shoulder and held her back.

He appeared right now.

Time had just run out.


Also part of Friday Fictioneers and Daily Prompt: Evasive Action

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10 thoughts on “Evading time

  1. Ohhhh I love the mysterious nature of this… had my mind in overdrive 😀


  2. gahlearner on said:

    Intriguing, but also a bit confusing.


  3. a lot of questions left unanswered.


  4. Maybe next time…! Hopefully.


  5. Nicely written. I could feel her tension, even though I’m not quite sure who she’s got to tell and what…


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