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25 Apr 2018
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Mountain views

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©Jan Wayne Fields

He loved breath-taking views. He could get lost in them for hours. Just sitting there relaxed, letting his mind wander over the horizon. It was always as if he was flying. This must be sort of what it feels like.

And in such a “flight”, he met her. A person who would suffer if she sat still for too long. But at that very moment she needed the tranquillity. That sense of escape from everything and everyone. And at that mountain top she found it.

Together with the person who would lift her up as high as he possibly could.

 

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14 thoughts on “Mountain views”

  1. Nan Falkner on said:

    Heart be still. Very romantic and nicely done!

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  2. michaelwynnauthor on said:

    This was great. A place and conditions so perfect everything that comes out of it is good

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  3. lisarey1990 on said:

    So gorgeously romantic. Loved it.

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  4. granonine on said:

    Aw, a love story on a mountain top. Doesn’t get any better than that!

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  5. jillyfunnell on said:

    Lovely meeting of soul mates. How wonderful they found each other. I hope they are not just each other’s dreams. Great description of peace and solitude too.

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  6. Susan A Eames on said:

    Such a sweet story!

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  7. pennygadd51 on said:

    That’s a lovely, gentle story. I really enjoyed it!

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  8. Iain Kelly on said:

    Perfectly met 🙂

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