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Whispering Silences

Reflecting feelings


©Nathan Sowers

It was the only thing left over from the yard sale. And she didn’t understand why. If she could afford it, it would have been the first thing she would spend her money on. It was plain and “normal”, but sometimes what looks simple is more than that. Plus, it definitely had a story. It must have. Nothing so “ordinary” was every what it appeared to be.

As the sun set, she found herself mesmerised by it. The clear reflection of the garden shed had captured her attention.

Or perhaps it was the flickering light that appeared at its window.


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17 thoughts on “Reflecting feelings

  1. Great cliffhanger!

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  2. Left us hanging there! 😉

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  3. Leaving us dangling there at the end. . . . shivery good story 🙂

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  4. I wonder what’s within! Intriguing.

    Click to read my FriFic tale

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  5. I liked the spooky feel at the end. Gothic horror.

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  6. I liked the transition at the end to a totally new story

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  7. Lovely hint of something more at the end. Well done.

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