MC's Whispers

Whispering Silences

Iced surprises

©Dale Rogerson

Wake up!!

She moaned, turning over the other side. He nudged her softly.

Come on! We have a great day ahead!

They had been driving all night to get there. They were so exhausted when they arrived, they fell asleep immediately.

He kissed her on the forehead and she sprung up. Ten minutes later, they were in the car driving again. But this time they marvelled at the view.

Nature was dressed in white. Everything seemed so calm, so majestic, so elegant.

He stopped at a wooden gazebo by the frozen lake.

He smiled shyly, trembling for what would follow…

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13 thoughts on “Iced surprises

  1. A long drive to a significant place, lets hope it all turns out well. A kiss on the forehead and she springs up: gosh that never worked on my wife, she just rolled under the blankets saying , yes yes I’ll get up in a minute.

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  2. A sweet story, and I hope she says “yes!” =)


  3. What a tease you are – leaving us to guess what is going to happen! Your writing drew me in, MCS.

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  4. Here comes the bride 🙂

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  5. Nature was dressed in white and so was she. Powerful metaphor if I understood your story correctly.

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  6. Tell me she says ‘yes’…

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