MC's Whispers

Whispering Silences

A tune that lasts forever

©J Hardy Carroll

She remembered it fondly. How she anticipated their first date. He had announced it to her with a paper plane that flew straight towards her. It was their way of communicating. She was walking on air all morning.

He took her to a diner that had just opened and was the talk of the town. The food was savoury. But that wasn’t what won her over; it was the song he chose on the jukebox and how he picked her up to dance rock n’ roll to what thereafter became their tune.

It was their time. And it became forever.

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6 thoughts on “A tune that lasts forever

  1. Anticipation! And a night well spent. Music is such a connection to memories. Well done.


  2. The music from that era is still running on endless tracks in my brain. Your story brought a lot of good memories back to life. Thanks.

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  3. Great illustration of how music can be so pertinent and important to us

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  4. You’ve painted quite the picture in this piece. Great writing!

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