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Whispering Silences

As dawn breaks

©Dale Rogerson

As dawn breaks beyond the spire, overwhelming the horizon with a mesmerizing honeycomb illusion, my thoughts wander towards you.

What would I give for you to be here, right next to me.

How many minutes would I spend speaking to your eyes without saying a word.

How many things we would experience together.

How many choices could we have made differently; but what if this was the right time to meet, and never before?

What if there is a reason life made our paths cross now?

As the sun rises, how many silences are filled with our kissing breaths intertwined…

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20 thoughts on “As dawn breaks

  1. Awww….that felt good to read. Well done.

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  2. A longing for a love that was lost. Beautifully written.

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  3. Your story has the feel of time travel to it. Such pleasant reverie…

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  4. Interesting; to think upon the what ifs, and bring a past first meeting forward to the now.

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  5. I read it as an opportunity not taken. A great sense of longing and what-ifs.

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  6. There seems to have been a great love, with one of the partners having died. The sadness, the emptiness, come through clearly.

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  7. Enjoyed the honeycomb illusion.

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  8. Love unbroken? Relationship broken by what? Sounds interesting.

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  9. A sentimental feeling for a missed one. I like the gentle longing mood.

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